寒鸦 Hanya

梦占中，勿扰。 Engaging in oneiromancy, do not disturb.

附件《海水》发送失败

Failed to send the attachment Seawater.

附件《海水》发送失败

Failed to send the attachment Seawater.

附件《海水》发送失败

Failed to send the attachment Seawater.

寒鸦 Hanya:

奇怪 为何无法发送

Strange. Why won't it go through?

寒鸦 Hanya:

难不成是 幽囚狱的信号屏蔽到了十王司各处

Could it be that the signal from the Shackling Prison is still blocked?

寒鸦 Hanya:

唉 此事虽说去年便提了检修 但审批至今迟迟未下达

Hmm... they proposed maintenance last year, but it's been delayed in the approval process...

开拓者 Trailblazer:

你要发给我什么附件啊？

So, what were you trying to send me?

寒鸦 Hanya:

是我写的 小说

A novel. I wrote it.

寒鸦 Hanya:

姐姐尤其钟爱惊险小说 越紧张刺激越好 她近来有些书荒 我想着自己写点给她看看 解解闷 只是我之前从未写过

My sister loves thriller novels. Lately, she's been running out of interesting stories, so I thought I'd write something for her. It's my first attempt, though.

附件《海水》发送失败

Failed to send the attachment Seawater.

寒鸦 Hanya:

附件仍发不出去 我直接贴给你 稍有些长 请不要介意

The attachment failed again. I'll copy and paste the content here. It's a bit long, and I hope you don't mind.

寒鸦 Hanya:

《海水》 寒鸦/著

Seawater, Written by Hanya

寒鸦 Hanya:

判官总是难以避免很多痛苦的决定。其中最为痛苦的一件事，莫过于寻找背叛者。总有些人会为了金钱、仇恨、甚至为了追求刺激，从最亲密的战友，堕落成最可怕的敌人。当我不得不以十王的名义，惩罚曾经的朋友时，那种痛苦，实在是难以承受。

Judges have forever grappled with the burden of excruciating decisions. Among them, few weigh on their conscience as heavily as the relentless pursuit of the betrayer. Motivated by greed, disdain, or the intoxication of danger, comrades can swiftly transform into enemies. And when the moment arrives to dispense justice upon a former ally in the name of the revered Ten Lords, the torment becomes unbearable.

寒鸦 Hanya:

现在我正要前往的地方，就是那样一个令人心痛的现场。我早已设下圈套，引诱那位与丰饶民勾结的歹人上钩。这位代号「海水」的人，曾出卖大量机要情报，使联盟在远斯纳乌特星区的布局全部暴露。我与「海水」斗智已久，现在，是时候收网了。

The place I now journey towards bears witness to a heart-rending spectacle. Long ago, I meticulously constructed a trap to ensnare the perpetrator who conspired with the Denizens of Abundance. This elusive criminal, known only as "Seawater," peddled invaluable secrets, unraveling the intricate tapestry of the Alliance within the Ryansnaut Sector. Engaged in an unyielding battle with "Seawater" for an extended duration, I now find myself poised to tighten the noose.

寒鸦 Hanya:

我一边赶去现场，一边在脑海中复盘——古道热肠的云骑新人、热情活泼的街头艺人、天真无邪的狐人少女、沉默狂野的无名客…「海水」究竟是他们中的谁？等到真相揭露的那一刻，我又该如何面对这必然残酷的结局……

As I hasten towards the scene, a vivid tableau unfolds within my mind. A greenhorn Cloud Knight, a spirited street performer, a guileless foxian girl, and one enigmatic Nameless... Which among them could be "Seawater"? And when the truth is ultimately unveiled, how shall I confront the inevitable, merciless denouement...?

寒鸦 Hanya:

突然，一支弩矢刺穿了我的心脏。我颓然倒下，用尽全身的力气望向行凶者的面庞——

Without warning, an arrow, launched from the shadows, pierces my heart. I collapse to the ground, I find my gaze locked onto the countenance of the assailant...

开拓者 Trailblazer:

等等等等，先停停

Wait, hold on a sec!

开拓者 Trailblazer:

真的要把整本小说都用短信粘贴给我吗！

Are you seriously planning to send me the entire novel through text messages!?

寒鸦 Hanya:

抱歉 还没贴完

Sorry. I'm not done yet.

寒鸦 Hanya:

「『海水』竟然是你！」

"Seawater... It is you!"

寒鸦 Hanya:

结束了

It ends here.

寒鸦 Hanya:

我只写了这么一些 对于接下来故事应如何发展 我有些茫然无措 因此想咨询你的建议

That's all I've managed to write so far. I'm a bit stuck and need some advice.

写的挺好啊

• 写的挺好啊 Very well-written.

开拓者 Trailblazer:

写的挺好啊，照这样继续写呗

It's great. Keep going with it.

寒鸦 Hanya:

此话当真

Really?

寒鸦 Hanya:

我自己总还不太满意 不过你这么说 我也有信心继续下去

While I'm not entirely satisfied with it, you've given me the confidence to keep going.

写的不咋样

• 写的不咋样 Not very well-written.

开拓者 Trailblazer:

写的不咋样，没头没尾没细节，这样确实会写不下去

To be honest, it's a bit long-winded. It lacks detail, and now I understand why you're stuck.

寒鸦 Hanya:

我也有同感 故事多少有些粗糙

I feel the same way. The story definitely needs refinement.

寒鸦 Hanya:

唉 我也再多读读姐姐喜欢的小说 对于小说到底该如何铺排细节 也许能有所感悟

Well, I'll try reading more of my sister's favorite novels and maybe I'll learn something about storytelling intricacies.

我们是嫌疑人？

• 我们是嫌疑人？ Are we suspects?

开拓者 Trailblazer:

为啥故事里的嫌疑人是我们几个啊？

Why are we the suspects in your story?

寒鸦 Hanya:

我听姐姐提起过 小说中的人物若以熟悉的人作为参照 比较容易落笔

My sister mentioned that it's easier to write a novel when the characters are based on familiar faces.

寒鸦 Hanya:

我想了想 或许是因为你们人都太好了 对于你们做坏事的样子 我无法想象 这么一想 难怪写不下去了 我应该以平时捉拿的犯人做范本

I've been thinking about it. Maybe it's because you guys are always too kind for me to imagine you doing anything evil. No wonder I'm stuck now. Perhaps I should draw inspiration from the criminals I usually deal with.

寒鸦 Hanya:

除去这些 还有其他建议吗

Any other suggestions besides that?

开拓者 Trailblazer:

最关键的问题，「海水」到底是谁啊？

The biggest question is, who is this "Seawater" anyway?

寒鸦 Hanya:

我还没想好

That... I haven't decided yet.

寒鸦 Hanya:

可能就是因为还没想好 所以才无法落笔吧

Maybe that's why I'm struggling with the writing.

寒鸦 Hanya:

感谢你的宝贵意见 我再好好想想 等完善好了再发给你

Thanks for your advice. I'll think about it and send it to you once it's ready.

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寒鸦 Hanya:

有空么

You got a minute?

寒鸦 Hanya:

或者说 这两天是否有空

Or, are you free sometime in the next few days?

寒鸦 Hanya:

或者说 若是这两天没空下周是否有空

And if not, how about next week?

寒鸦 Hanya:

或者说 若是下周没空下个月是否有空

And if not, how about next month?

这两天没空

• 这两天没空 I'm busy these next couple of days

开拓者 Trailblazer:

这两天大概没空

I'm busy these next couple of days.

寒鸦 Hanya:

没事 如果之后有时间 一起看幻戏吗

Never mind. If you are free afterward, would you like to watch an immersia together with me?

随时有空

• 随时有空 For you, I'm free any time

开拓者 Trailblazer:

我随时都有空

Feel free to call me anytime of the day

寒鸦 Hanya:

那便好 若有时间 一起看幻戏吗

Great. Would you like to watch an immersia together with me?

开拓者 Trailblazer:

为什么突然找我看幻戏？

What's with the sudden interest in immersia?

寒鸦 Hanya:

姐姐已是偃偶之躯 还阳时间颇为有限 每逢姐姐还阳 我都尽量带她看些好看的 玩些好玩的 吃些好吃的

Well, since my sister is a puppet and only able to spend a limited amount of time in the mortal world, I always try to make the most of it by taking her to watch interesting things, have fun, and enjoy good food.

寒鸦 Hanya:

最近有些新上的幻戏 想和姐姐一起去看 但我因为工作的缘由 对很多事物也不怎么能提起兴趣了 对于自己选择的幻戏是否足够有意思 是否会无聊 我心里并没有底 姐姐难得还阳 要是把时间浪费在无聊的幻戏上 我觉得我很有可能 会内疚到魔阴身 所以我想先找人一起做下功课 你见识比较广 应该能挑选出好看有趣的幻戏

Lately, I've been thinking about exploring some new immersias with her, but due to my job, I've lost interest in many things, and I'm not sure if the immersias I choose will be enjoyable. It's such a rare occasion for my sister to be in the mortal world, and if I waste her precious time on dull immersias, I'll feel incredibly guilty, to the point of mara corruption. That's why I need someone else's suggestion. I believe someone as knowledgeable as you could help me find captivating immersias

开拓者 Trailblazer:

可以倒是可以，但兴趣这东西毕竟是吾之蜜糖彼之砒霜，不知道雪衣小姐喜欢哪种幻戏？

That makes sense, but everyone has their own preferences. I wonder what kind of immersias Miss Xueyi likes?

寒鸦 Hanya:

姐姐钟爱惊险刺激的 找凶手的 抓特务的 打僵尸的 闹鬼的 多是常人觉得刺激的情节 但我早已辨别不出 哪些算是真正意义上的 刺激 你若是像我一样 每日沉浸在各种魔阴身的第一人称记录里 估计也不会觉得任何幻戏 刺激 因此我需要你帮忙 以常人的眼光鉴定 刺激

My sister loves thrillers. Murder mysteries, spy flicks, zombies, and basically anything with thrilling plots. However, I find it difficult to discern what is "thrilling." If you were like me, immersed in the first-person experiences of various mara-struck individuals all day, you will also come to feel that no immersia can be "thrilling." That's why I need your help to tell me what is "thrilling" with the eyes of an ordinary person.

寒鸦 Hanya:

等我买好了票 再联系你

I'll get back to you once I've got the tickets.

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寒鸦 Hanya:

有时我会萌发一些想法 不知你是否理解 但我觉得你应该能理解 所以希望和你分享一下

Sometimes I may have some thoughts that I'm not sure if you'll get, but it might be worth a try. So, I'd like to share them with you.

寒鸦 Hanya:

在幽囚狱 阅读形形色色的魔阴身记忆 一看就是一连几晚 但在外 我总会看到很多人抱怨 黉学先生布置了好多假期作业 真的太累了 每天只能出去玩两个时辰 真的太累了

In the Shackling Prison, I've been immersed in memories of mara-struck individuals for days on end. Meanwhile, in the outside world, I constantly hear people complaining about trivial things like having too much homework or feeling exhausted with only 2 dual-hours of playtime each day. They complain about being tired.

寒鸦 Hanya:

我若是有半个时辰能喘口气 都能算是十王法外开恩

For me, even a short break for half a dual-hour every few days would be a precious gift from the Ten Lords.

各有各的劳累嘛

• 各有各的劳累嘛 Everyone carries their own burden.

开拓者 Trailblazer:

不同年纪有不同年纪的劳累嘛，大家阈值不一样的

Younger people tend to have a lower threshold for stress.

确实，真是气人

• 确实，真是气人 Yes. Highly annoying.

开拓者 Trailblazer:

确实，好多人就是身在福中不知福

That's true. Many people don't realize how good they have it

寒鸦 Hanya:

唉 其实我再想想就觉得 有这样的抱怨也颇为正常 我以前应该也曾有过这种时候 也能理解

Well, the more I think about it, the more I understand them. Actually, I used to complain about those things too when I was younger.

寒鸦 Hanya:

我隐隐约约记得 小时候我好像觉得 自己以后肯定不适合工作 当时姐姐还安慰了我 但具体安慰了我什么 我也不太记得 当然 我开始工作后才发现 其实也没有人真正适合工作 而且在十王司这个地方 适不适合工作都一样 喝完忘川酒 都一样的

I vaguely remember when I was a child, believing that I wasn't cut out for work. My sister would comfort me, although I can't recall exactly what she said. It was only after I started working that I realized no one is truly cut out for work, especially in the Ten-Lords Commission. Even if you don't have what it takes, once you drink the Wine of Oblivion, you simply do what needs to be done.

寒鸦 Hanya:

不过平时的压力要是积攒到那个时候 很有可能已经来不及了 所以有空的时候 还是下班去杜氏茶庄喝两杯 会比较有用

However, I never let my daily stress build up to the point of mara corruption. That's why I visit Du's Teahouse after work to enjoy some tea. His tea works wonders.

寒鸦 Hanya:

你要是有时间 也可以过来

If you're free, don't hesitate to join me.