《圣甲虫计划》 Project: Scarab

波奇「引以为傲」的企划书，但实际内容…… Bocchi's "impressive" business plan, but the content is actually... well...

一、任务宗旨

I. Objective

匹诺康尼——包容一切的乌托邦，金碧辉煌的美梦之都。长久以来，在家族的领导下，这座繁华的城市始终具有鲜活的生命力。然而鲜有人知的是，作为其重要收入来源之一的旅游业，近年来却渐有缓增的趋势！

Penacony — an all-encompassing utopia, a gilded city of dreams, has long been a prosperous city full of vibrant life under the leadership of The Family. However, little do most know that tourism — a significant source of Penacony's income — has experienced a slowdown in recent years!

【批注：请给出相关年份的具体数据对照。】

[Note: Please provide specific data pertaining to the relevant years.]

在我看来，这将为城市发展的巨大隐患，如果无人以重视并趁早采取措施，甚至将对整个经济体系造成极其严重的影响！而也正是在这之中，我看到了巨大的商机，因而在此郑重提出本企划！

In my opinion, this poses a considerable potential danger to the city's development. If left unaddressed, it could have serious implications for the entire economic system! Recognizing the massive business opportunity in this issue, I solemnly present this business plan!

【批注：请提供相应的论据支撑，以及尽量避免频繁使用「！」。】

[Note: Please provide supporting evidence for your statements, and refrain from excessive use of exclamation marks.]

二、活动形式

II. Activity Format

没人了解钟表匠，但人人都想成为钟表匠——这名字身披神秘面纱，一夜之间风靡星际。无数游客蜂拥而至，在此上演一场寻宝的狂欢。这些外来者却往往在一场场盛会中沉溺，整日声色犬马、纸醉金迷。

Nobody truly knows the Watchmaker, but everyone wants to become the Watchmaker. This mysterious name has swiftly become a sensation across galaxies, captivating countless tourists eager to embark on a thrilling treasure-hunting adventure. Upon arrival, these visitors instead often lose themselves in endless festivities, indulging in neverending pleasure and hedonism.

【批注：请使用简洁、精准的语言。】

[Note: Please use concise and precise language.]

寻宝的宾客们带来的经济效益，相信大家已经有目共睹。因此我认为，我们应当充分把握住时机，模仿钟表匠的传说，通过适当的宣传手段，在梦境之中带起新一轮属于我们公司的寻宝热！

The economic benefits brought about by treasure-hunting enthusiasts are already apparent to all. Therefore, I think we should seize this opportunity to emulate the legend of the Watchmaker and employ suitable promotional methods to reignite the treasure-hunting fervor within the Dreamscape!

我的初步设想是，可以打造一件精美的珠宝（比如一个黄金与宝石制成的圣甲虫），然后赋予其一段充满传奇色彩、感人肺腑的传说（可以参考或改编某些星球关于这种动物的神话传说），并通过大量宣发将其展现在人们的视野中。这样当游客们厌倦了匹诺康尼的物质繁荣与大众娱乐之后，一定会被这具有独特内涵的传说所吸引，然后我们再及时推出足够精彩的活动，相信定然能获得不菲的收入！

My preliminary idea is about creating an exquisitely crafted piece of jewelry (such as a scarab made of gold and gems). Then, we will give a captivating legend for the scarab (drawing inspiration from myths and folklore on certain planets regarding this animal) and ensure its prominent display and widespread awareness through intensified marketing. That way, when tourists become weary of ordinary entertainment and material joys available in Penacony, they will be definitely attracted by this unique and profound narrative. After that, we will launch sufficiently thrilling activities at the opportune moment, and will surely receive substantial revenue!

【批注：请勿在企划文本中频繁出现「我认为」、「相信」、「必定」等主观性较强的词。】

[Note: Refrain from excessive use of subjective language such as "I think," "I believe," and "definitely."]

而在这场潮流兴起之后，我们还应该充分利用其累积起来的知名度，进行阶段性的活动复刻，并适时安排一些出乎客人们意料的「惊喜」，以求给他们带来最大的乐趣与享受。【批注：请在有可靠论据的支撑下，客观论证上述手段可能有效的理由，并详细阐述复刻的活动内容以及惊喜部分内容。】

Once the trend is established, we should capitalize on its accumulated popularity by organizing re-runs of this event in phases, while incorporating new surprise elements outside of the guests' expectations, optimizing their joy and entertainment.[Note: Objectively present the reasons why the aforementioned strategies may prove effective supported by reliable arguments, and elaborate in detail the events to be re-run and what the surprise elements will be.]

三、市场分析

III. Market Analysis

众所周知，人们对伟大或未知的事物总心怀敬畏与好奇。 【批注：同样「众所周知」，此部分内容应给出市场调研报告及相关数据模型分析论证，而非个人情感抒发。】

It is widely known that people respect and are fascinated by great or unknown phenomena.[Note: It is also widely known that the "Market Analysis" section should be based on market research reports, data modeling analysis, and supporting arguments, rather than personal beliefs.]

我曾听闻，有人受疯子所托，手持烛火跨过深池，只因疯子相信如此便能改变世界。因此很多看似毫无意义的行为，却常有人会热衷甚至沉迷——毕竟探索过程中所收获的满足感，总能赋予生活中的一切以意义。

I have heard of a person commissioned by a lunatic to traverse a pit with a candle in hand, only because the lunatic believed that this action would change the world. This illustrates how seemingly purposeless actions often ignite enthusiasm and even obsession in people. After all, the satisfaction derived from the exploration process itself imbues meaning into all aspects of people's lives.

【批注：请勿在脱离用户需求的前提下进行揣测性分析。】

[Note: Refrain from speculative analyses devoid of users' actual needs as the premise.]

在好奇心与探索欲的驱使下，人们在「寻宝」过程中的价值投入往往会远远超过宝物本身，却依旧乐此不疲。这便是所谓的「寻宝情节」，也是这份《圣甲虫计划》的根本所在！

Fueled by curiosity and the desire for discovery, guests will make investments whose value far surpasses that of the treasure itself, yet still derive immense enjoyment from the experience. This forms the essence of the so-called "treasure-hunting complex" and serves as the inspiration behind Project: Scarab!

【批注：请勿在企划文本中大篇幅阐释「设计灵感」、引经据典以及生造概念。】

[Note: Avoid elaborating extensively on your design inspiration, quoting obscure references, or fabricating abstract concepts in a business plan.]

四、结语

IV. Conclusion

《圣甲虫计划》的宗旨在于，在带动匹诺康尼旅游经济发展的同时，充分向慕名而来的客人们展示城市的价值观与家族的和谐友爱，以实现物质与精神收益两手抓的宏大目标。

The target of Project: Scarab is to revitalize the tourism economy in Penacony. At the same time, it will fully showcase the city's values and The Family's harmonious love to the visitors who flock here due to our fame. Through this project, we aim to achieve both material benefits and psychological fulfillment.

为此，我怀着满腔热情写下这份企划，希望能够为家族与匹诺康尼贡献出自己的绵薄之力。

With great enthusiasm, I present this business plan in the hopes of making a humble contribution to the success of The Family and Penacony.

【审核反馈】

Feedback

1.本篇内容空泛、语焉不详、缺乏客观论述，未达到作为企划书的基本标准；

1. The content of this plan lacks clarity, coherence, and objective discussion, failing to meet the basic standards of a business plan.

2.行文逻辑混乱，缺乏实际案例分析、市场调查、规划方案与具体策略设计，不具备可实现性；

2. The content of the writing is logically confusing, lacking practical case studies, market research, planning, and specific strategies. It lacks feasibility.

3.缺乏发现并理性分析问题的能力，对于市场与客户实际需求理解不足，提出的方案并不具有参考价值。

3. The plan lacks the capability for problem identification and rational analysis, providing a limited understanding of the market and customer needs. The proposed solutions lack reference value.

综上所述，该企划书不予批准。

In conclusion, the business plan is hereby rejected.

市场开拓部 旅游业务组长：费曼

Feinman, Leader of the Tourism Business Team, Marketing Development Department